[Musings: literary freestyles, emotional outpours, writing self-analysis, editing and grammar discussion]
October 4, 2010
Feels So Good
Every now and again I encounter an image that conjures such strong emotion in me that I have to grab the nearest writing tool to capture what's coming. This image was created by an artist unknown to me. I wish I could give him or her credit, but unfortunately this image, like so many others, is just out there, belonging to no one, but conceived by someone. I want to give the artist credit, if you know a name or website, please let me know. I want to pay my respect. I spotted this image on a messageboard and found it so serene, so striking. I felt something. The woman was telling me what she was thinking. This is what I could gather:
You wanna know something?
It had never happened for me, that whole love thing
Reciprocity, romance, security, being "the one"
But then He happened. For me.
I had accepted the fact that nobody wanted me
But then He happened. For me.
I had to ask God if he had the right person
Didn't want to get my hopes up. Know what I mean?
Mmmm, mmmm, I don't want to go to work today
Just want to lay up under this man
It's been so long, so long since I felt so good
I wouldn't be any good at any job today anyway
Not after last night, and the night before that, and the night before that
This man makes me feel so good
He even smells good too
Nothing from a bottle, just something special his pores secrete
And don't get me started on the warmth of his breath and the body that creates it
I want to savor and cherish the moment, just in case this is all a dream
Know what I mean?
I would hope life wouldn't be so cruel, but I know how cruel life can be
Life, please, I beg you, don't
Just let me relax, and enjoy his touch and the way I feel right now
I feel so good
(Copyright Jennifer Singleton 2010)
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Awesome...it is amazing that one picture could create various images in ones mind. I was attempting to think of what she was thinking before I read yours and it was so different. Either way, you really captured some deep emotions. As always, you are a great writer.
ReplyDeleteP.S. And you have some nice legs!
Why thank you!
ReplyDeleteI wonder if they are cosmically sharing the same dream
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